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Spiraling into my own little Hell,
Nightmares coming true,
fears alive and hunting me,
Death will not come,
Tortured within my own mind,
being psychologically broken down,
There is no escape,
Hope has long since retreated,
Faith broken long ago,
My mind shattered a long time past.

This darkness never ends,
The screams echo in my head,
the pain unbearable,
I won't make it out alive,
I won't make it out at all,
It has me in its grasp,
never loosening its grip,
I am the prize
Forever here ill dwell,
Fiction has become reality.
one of my fav poems ive written
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Strawberry-Chick Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I won't make it out alive,
I won't make it out at all,
It has me in its grasp,
never loosening its grip,
I am the prize

Loved that part! If I were you, I would have expanded more the theme of the prize.
Nice job!
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KinOfWolves Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol thanks
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Emmi-Kat Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Unfortunately, it's very true.
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KinOfWolves Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ya i know lol
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:iconjesd2:
Lovely poem.
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KinOfWolves Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thnx
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:iconjesd2:
No problem.
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FairyTail11 Feb 1, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah i agree its reall cool :)
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